Grade 4 composition comments universal

2022-05-04 0 By

The general comments of the fourth grade composition are as follows: 1. The plot develops gently, lacks certain ups and downs, and the plot changes are bland and lack of new ideas.2, the two metaphors in the article is very wonderful, unique, after reading there is an immersive feeling, I like it very much, I hope to enjoy it in the future, the teacher believe you will not let me down.The process is detailed, but the end is not complete.The structure is unreasonable and gives people a sense of anticlimactic ending.4, the book is beautiful, clean, like the streets of the seaside town, can not find a dirty?Neat handwriting, let a person see really comfortable?Your handwriting is as beautiful as it looks in print?I’m ashamed that my handwriting is not as good as yours, okay?5, can write the character’s inner activities very vivid, is indeed commendable, left a deep impression on people 5) article from the beginning to the end, the center is clear, the structure is complete 6, the plot is straight, there is no suspense, flat straight narrative like a running account.The process is detailed, but the end is not complete.The structure is unreasonable and gives people a sense of anticlimactic ending.01. Your composition is filled with emotion and love for XX.”Love xx, write great!Beautiful language, big star using anthropomorphic rhetoric, vividly xx four sequence landscape topography out.02, the story is vivid and specific, the words and deeds of the characters conform to their identity characteristics.It shows that you have a heart for life.The article comes from life, so the language isn’t beautiful, but it’s real and interesting, and it’s sensible.Your article is precise in wording, plain and natural in language, and the level of writing is clear.This is the greatest success of your composition!I hope you can feel and appreciate life with your heart and make progress in the future learning process!